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New White Collar Fic: The Trouble We Make vs The Trouble We Take
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vain_glorious
Title: The Trouble We Make Vs. The Trouble We Take
Author: vain_glorious
Fandom: White Collar
Wordcount: ~9,500
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Gen
Warning(s): Mild violence
Prompt(s): I am pretty sure this came from a prompt at CollarCorner, but now I can't find it.
Notes: Set some time after Point Blank.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: El looks a lot like Kate. Kate's enemies have noticed, too.


(at DW due to length)

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This was really great. I loved how you wrote Elizabeth, strong and a fighter. And Neal LOL out of his depth trying to protect El. Oh and I have to add Mozzie's poorly cryptic message to Peter and Elizabeth. :D

Thanks for the comment! :)

That was so fun to read :) I love the way you include hilarious moments in the fic - Mozzie was so great throughout :)

And HA to this: "And shooting a guy outside a federal building assured having to deal with a much faster law enforcement response time, so at least there was some kind of mutual assured destruction, which Neal knew Russians historically enjoyed." lol

And I like how Neal figured out what to do with Alexei and how El turned out to be so good at conning - I think she would be amazing at it.

So glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the feedback! :)

I could not stop laughing. This was hilarious. Just loved it.

Thanks for the comment! :)

Interesting! The plot, the characterization, El!
I think the show needs more "con" and less law abiding Neal. This story shows Neal as a bit more human: errors, flaws, issues, - a guy who may not be violent but is still a criminal after all.

Sorry to jump in here, but I want to hug your brain so hard.
YES.
LESS LAW ABIDING NEAL PLZ.
This is all I want from Season 3 atm. MORE FUN.
Cause I mean, half the show is about A CON MAN. He can be redeemed just before his sentence. For now bring on the bad boy I say!

I'm not holding out hope we'll see any of that on the show...but I guess that's what fic is for.

lol! From my lurking of Jeff Eastin's tweets: I think we are going to get our bad boy back... (crosses fingers and kisses cat's paw for lack of lucky charms)

Thanks for the feedback! :)

This was seriously SO.DAMN.GOOD.
Character voice. Perfect.
Seriously, Mozzie's lines - SO HIM. His warning Peter and the way he did it was just GUH, brilliant. I want to see it in show. *_*
Evolution of the plot? Sublime.
Seriously I can't praise this high enough. Oh MAN.
This is everything I'd been hoping WC Fandom to be.
SO GOOD I WANT TO RUN AWAY WITH IT AND ELOPE.
/not really an exaggeration.

Wow, heh, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :)

Fun!

(Anonymous)
Thank you! I enjoy your stories. I liked how smoothly everything worked out in the end. Elizabeth is made of kick ass.

BookWorm848

So glad you enjoyed? :)

Awesome!

I love the interaction between Elisabeth and Neal. :)

Thank you!

Thanks for the comment. :)

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